From With Real Toads–When Good Wishes Go Bad. Wednesday prompt.
Round, white stones
perfect and alone.
How odd, the shapes curved by the ocean.
I found you in a sea.
I had been drifting on a makeshift raft.
Counting constellations I couldn’t name.
I caressed your smooth unending circumference,
turning and turning you.
Stone. Open,
I wished.
Tell me the answers and the points
of navigation in the charts. Direct
me skyward, seaward–I don’t care.
Millenniums inside your corrosion,
only a small life in mine.
A little life I solidify, erode, smooth
into the circumference of a cold moon.
Show me, love, the moon–her bone
pulling me along the tide, tell me
-where is it I am supposed to go?
Stone. Open,
I wished.
I am turning and turning myself
and finding I have no edges, no borders.
Unframed with no key, a solitaire sphere in orbit
among grains of sand-each one a story.
I turn outside myself in these pieces
of the universe; we are such stuff
the stars are made of.
I plunk you back into the water-
you and I-
the rhythm of direction is a circle
leading us back into ourselves.
image credit HERE
Beautifully haunting..!!
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That wish you find between the sea and sky is like catching moonlight with a sieve. Stunning inagery
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thanks Bjorn 🙂
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Wonderful and haunting!
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thanks Sarah!!!
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Like catching smoke just to find out that it has not body… and we had no hands anyway. Eerie. And so very beautiful.
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Magaly–exactly 🙂
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Very beautiful and melancholy, enjoyed very much,,,
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thank you Elle!
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This is breathtaking, Amy.
“Counting constellations I couldn’t name.” haunts me.
It’s all just so gorgeous. I feel an affinity with stones, too.
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Thank you–it was a spur of the moment what-do-I-write beginning and it worked for me and I’m glad you liked it!
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thank you Whimsy!
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This beautiful and profound. How we wish to possess things that are better left loved from afar, Love you, babe — and LOVE the “Write like a motherfucker, sweetpea”- that’s a quote and a half. also, love your half portrait, love love love for you!
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Mosk I just love you. Mwah
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Haunting sense of endless circles weaving round beautiful imagery.
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Heavens, that’s gorgeous–such ecstasy in “smooth unending circumference,” forever rippling out at poem’s end into the circumference of the self. Wish upon a stone, a moon, a poem, and the gift is an Om. A yes. Oh yes.
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Thanks Brendan. It was a fun write. I’m slowly stepping into other places to write about new things (and positive–who knew!)
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Love what you did with this, taking it to a whole new level.
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thanks very much Rose, and thanks for reading!!
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This is a superb piece, really beautifully written.
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thank you Kerry 🙂
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