It’s Open Link Night 98 over at dVerse Poets Pub! Come share, read, and join in the fun!
In this sleepy little town
down behind the milkweed
to the hidden trail
that winds through the pines
and then,

breaking
sun
just like that
and once the light
has teared your eyes
you see the sea below
like a memory
like a dream
like a dead sea
like when you were a little girl
it carries the same sounds–
lapping, splashing, trickling off
your fingertips;
it carries the time you thought
you discovered it
it carries a night long ago when
you opened your eyes beneath it,
alone in that dark
it carries a constant answer
to a question you have no words for
take me, you say,
take me to that place.
You could go there, you could feel it
all you have to do is weep.
There is a sadness to this beautiful poem.
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You had me there. The ending will stay with me for a long time.
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Thanks Laurie
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wow…powerful verse amy jo…the answer to the question you never find the words for…that got me…i often venture to the sea to refind the rhythm of life…yours felt like a going back…and breaking a bit so you can go forward….the take me is def felt…
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Thanks so much Brian!
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“and once the light
has teared your eyes”
love this!
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Delightful piece just rolls right along into that fabulous last line. Wow!
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Thank you Linda!
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This carries many memories for me, Amy Jo. It also brings to mind the poetry of Mary Oliver. If you don’t know her work, that about the biggest compliment I could give.
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Holy crap Victoria….THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! Wow you just made my night! Week!
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This took me right along–beautiful, and your last line just took my breath away
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Thank you very much Audrey!
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just like that…
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I would mind following that path…shedding those tears…
a lovely and mesmerizing piece.
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One of my favorite reads of the night. I was there, lapping up every word.
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Thank you so much!!! 🙂
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The last verse got me. I will read this over again a few times. Thanks for sharing!
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What a lovely take on nostalgia. Very nice. -Mike
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Thanks Boston!
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Memories come without being consciously called, a word, a scent or even the turn of a calendar page. As for weeping, I think it helps healing. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much Beth!
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the sea is dark and mysterious and you make that come alive.
thanks for your kind words at my place.
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Likewise, Ed
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There’s one beach in particular that does this to me…other times a find the sea lonely to look at, unless in good company. Thank you for reminding me of that one particular beach : )
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Well you’re welcome Rowan!
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What a lovely tribute to melancholy.. and the curing is to weep… that last verse was really really good.
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Thanks Bjorn 🙂
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I love the answer to a question you have no words for – and the last line is stunning. Really strong writing Amy-Jo
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Thank you very much Tony
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This brought up a lot of emotion in me~I felt like I went back to my childhood through your words and different sensory experiences that bring up memories. I get really sad when I hear the sound of a whipperwill because of a hard time in my childhood. Thanks for a great poem that really spoke to me.
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Linda I’m so glad for your experience with this poem. Wish you well,
Amy
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All you have to do is weep…so true sometimes…
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“it carries a night long ago when
you opened your eyes beneath it,
alone in that dark….”
You leave us with our own underlying, unspoken questions–very nice.
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This is just how I feel sometimes when I look at the ocean after being away for a long time. Thanks for putting it into words.
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