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there is a humming
I hear
like an African choir
like the early delta blues
I heard it before
in the mirage of July
when I was eleven without permission
discovering the earth
in my PF Flyers
and rusty schwinn, speakers
from my portable radio wrapped
around the handle bars,
American Pie static in the air,
finding the swimhole no one
had discovered I thought
the humming then–a promise
of my future
of adventure
of a brave life
in love with the world
in my teeth
it drones to me at night now
when I can’t sleep
anxious beneath the stars
my smoke breathing
into the black
wake up! wake up!
sing, girl, sing
I loved the metaphor here. So many wonderful images and ideas. Nicely done!
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The whole thing pulses with electricity, and undefinable expectation…. I really like this!
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Love the tone of ‘yesteryears’ you captured in the poem.
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really very nice…funny, i just wrote yesterday on waking up….really like the call to sing and you hearken me back to simpler times….
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sometimes i wish back those childhood days as well when life seemed to be so uncomplicated.. a great capture beyond the visible
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This struck home to me on so many levels, I often find myself in the same shoes, always looking back and remembering some of the vivid childhood memories. Well done!
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This is poignant & lovely, Amy…there’s nothing quite like music to help sooth us & connect us to the world.
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This is such an audacious, life-affirming poem. I like that this drive, this hum has been there all along – just that the world and all its malcontents want to to drown it. Don’t let them. Sing, baby, sing! Great job, Mosk
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Love it!!!!!!! Thanks Mosk!!!!!! ❤
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A memoir and anthem all wrapped in one…very nice work, very focused writing.
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This is wonderful… the tension is perfect, the flow fabulous. Poignant and lovely.
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I love this!!!
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Sehr groovy- really dug this piece- and loved the “American Pie static in the air.” Peace.
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