
it beat at my back at night
the wings of it
that I gave flight
it used to swallow all light
when in the corner I dropped the leash.
Caged. Dropped. Disected. Given
to a something else
as vague as air.
To let it go means breath
and
the grief for what I was dissipates to the beating of wings–
a faint song–in the night
too broken, too translucent
to damage my dreams.
i really like this. captures a mood in form and the imagery. wonderful job!
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lovely writing! mine’s here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
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skillful writing..
lovely imagery.
keep writing.
you rock!
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This is haunting and beautiful. The imagery is magic…and it leaves me feeling so sad…
My potluck: so maybe
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